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22 September 2019 @ 10:23 pm
_Professor_ cover, take 2  
Joe Wojo Jr: pic#110087271wojorider on September 23rd, 2019 03:52 am (UTC)
i like this one!
the shorter hair cut really helped.
(Anonymous) on September 23rd, 2019 05:42 am (UTC)
Much better
Much, much better. But I am not sure the writing stands out enough against light blue and white in thumbnail size. Face looks a bit strange on the neck. Colour and shape don't quite match up.
matapampamuphoff on September 23rd, 2019 02:02 pm (UTC)
Re: Much better
Yeah, it's purchased art, and I thought it was a photograph, but the color change is very abrupt.
stan_millerstan_miller on September 23rd, 2019 09:28 am (UTC)
I like this one, it looks finished and not so busy.

At thumbnail size the flame doesn't stand out much with the text behind it reducing the visibility. If you shortened that to just "UV" it might work better.
(Anonymous) on September 23rd, 2019 05:36 pm (UTC)
I think it is much more pleasing than the previous iteration, and looks better (not great but far better) in thumbnail. I think Stan's comment regarding the text on the chart is spot on - abbreviations may be helpful.

(Anonymous) on September 23rd, 2019 06:25 pm (UTC)
The hand holding the fire looks melted and distorted to me
stan_millerstan_miller on September 23rd, 2019 06:38 pm (UTC)
It looks like the forearm is a bit long too, holding my hand like that has my palm below my shoulder level, not above.

Shorter would also move the fire down to clearer and more visible space, maybe move her hand down into the wizard bar on the chart? Not down to where the orange bar washes the fire out though.