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13 September 2019 @ 10:58 pm
I need to let it sit for a couple of weeks, then reread it. In the mean time, if you want to read it through without hnting around for the next snipet:  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e8niTAqmbev8BW7WAWISWWTrNbi299FlGHZiyZkq874/edit?usp=sharing
Joe Wojo Jr: pic#110087271wojorider on September 14th, 2019 12:39 pm (UTC)
i enjoyed the reading whole story
Overall I really enjoyed the book. Not really a surprise, with the exception when you were exploring the darkside, i've enjoyed everything you have put out. Q few minor typos. I did notice one section where you had a placeholder for the Helios interaction in the later chapters.
(Anonymous) on September 15th, 2019 02:06 am (UTC)
There are about 90+ instances of "Poohbah", 50+ instances of "Poobah", and one instance of "Pooh Bah."

matapampamuphoff on September 15th, 2019 01:13 pm (UTC)
Picky picky . . . Apparently it's Pooh-Bah.

Edited at 2019-09-15 01:17 pm (UTC)
Jasinijasini on September 16th, 2019 08:28 pm (UTC)
I saw the previews for this in the previous books, and just had to find your blog to read the rest. :D And now I'm hooked on the Professor as well.

I wasn't looking for typos, but found a couple of places where you said *Kali* instead of *Cali*.

Also, Xen thinks about AnnaKarina and JeeJong (which I'm sure I've spelled wrong) before they've been properly introduced to us, and definitely not to him.

A question: is Xen still worried about what the collective unconscious will do to Rael if they officially get together?

This last is probably just me, but I'm so used to seeing "Old Wolf" (or Auld Wulfe) that seeing him referred to as just plain Wolf seems almost disrespectful.

Anyway, I appreciated this opportunity to advance read it. :D