matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,


Any more opinions as to name changes, or anything else? I'm about to finalize it.

Captain Black and Lieutenant Brazil were place keeper names while I was writing, and I've got a bunch of unnamed Purple kids.

Mandolin and Harp got a comment, anyone else have any problems with their names?

I doubt that anyone but Kaat and Danny Black will ever get mentioned again (oh, that's not safe to say!) but you never know when you'll need a character to just walk through.


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