matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,
matapam
pamuphoff

Dithering . . .

To write the final fight now . . . or to go back and start putting in little scenes--the three ladies from Pre-cog, more Dave and Qamar, more bits of campaigns . . .

Yes, I procratinating, trying to figure out how to get everyone I want into the last big scene. How exactly to get that narcisitic ass to snap and do something that stupid. How to get Dave to _have_ to rely on his magic. How to get Qamar to breakthrough her block.
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