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22 March 2019 @ 09:39 pm
Cover trials, again  
(Anonymous) on March 23rd, 2019 03:27 am (UTC)
I like how when the gate intersects with the ground, it implies distance and size well. It's harder to do that with it in the air - it's a great improvement than the first version.
(Anonymous) on March 23rd, 2019 04:48 am (UTC)
Fine except for fonts. In multiverse the space between L and T looks too big. Your name would look better if the letters were slimmer, not so tightly kerned.
cnmckenney on March 23rd, 2019 01:35 pm (UTC)
Much better
This one works better. I miss the mountains but that's a personal preference. With the exception of the gap between L and T in Multiverse.
Do you need the hint of another gate off to the left to imply multiple gates to go with the multi in multiverse?
If you need another concept how about 6-12 gates on a rising field with your 2 earth spies/scouts about half way into the field with one standing just at the edge of one gate and the other crouched and apparently trying to peer thru without being seen.
(Anonymous) on March 23rd, 2019 06:06 pm (UTC)
I like it. I'll definitely buy it. But then, I would anyway. . . 8^)