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23 February 2019 @ 05:21 pm
ekuah on February 24th, 2019 12:11 am (UTC)
Much better.
(Anonymous) on February 24th, 2019 01:50 am (UTC)
I agree, this angle almost looks like he's trying for an "I wouldn't.." glare, plus the background gives it more character.
(Anonymous) on February 24th, 2019 02:40 am (UTC)
Better. What is that black band around his neck? Would Stone wear a collar?t
matapampamuphoff on February 24th, 2019 03:48 am (UTC)
That's his bare minimum to get started. Running shorts, some cash and ID. Actually shouldn't have a knot in it.
matapampamuphoff on February 24th, 2019 03:46 am (UTC)

Any other issues?
(Anonymous) on February 24th, 2019 04:37 am (UTC)
"he found them" might work better than "he's found them" regardless of technicalities.
mbarker: Me typing?mbarker on February 24th, 2019 08:02 am (UTC)
Is that the sun over Superstition Mountain? Just wondering...
matapampamuphoff on February 24th, 2019 01:33 pm (UTC)
I just sketched in a generic mesa over a sunset photo of mine.
mbarkermbarker on February 25th, 2019 02:49 am (UTC)
It's good. If you are familiar with mesas in the Southwest, it has that feel. At least, for me, it did.

Had one odd thought -- what if you put red dots in the o and e of Stone? Turn them into two eyes, with one winking? They are already halfway there...