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14 January 2019 @ 01:34 pm
Working on covers . . .  
Found better art.

(Anonymous) on January 14th, 2019 07:49 pm (UTC)
is other-worldly enough to be SFnal, and doesn't (to me) signal mystery or romance.

(Anonymous) on January 14th, 2019 08:17 pm (UTC)
I like it.

Regardless of which I'm going to make one (hopefully) minor suggestion.

Maybe rotate the road a bit, so it doesn't so readily bring to mind a Pyramid?
(Anonymous) on January 14th, 2019 08:18 pm (UTC)
Like it. Seems to cover all aspects of the storiy. But he still seems too healthy ( minor quibble ).

(Anonymous) on January 14th, 2019 11:18 pm (UTC)
Like it. It works very well.

Not sure about writing colour. The blue is overly dominant, or maybe a size too big and I don't think your name will show in a thumbnail.
mbarkermbarker on January 15th, 2019 02:23 am (UTC)
(Anonymous) on January 15th, 2019 11:52 am (UTC)
He looks like an old guy, to me. My takeaway from story is Dave caring for the other two. Could you find/make a silhouette of three soldiers? I like the silhouette cos it is about glimpses of Dave and D & N through the bag and Dave ghosting through the world
matapampamuphoff on January 15th, 2019 12:17 pm (UTC)
Guys, there's not much I can do. it's purchased art. I am not an artist.
(Anonymous) on January 15th, 2019 12:39 pm (UTC)
Anything we say is just icing. The cover is good. You done well.
cnmckenney on January 15th, 2019 02:58 pm (UTC)
walking figure
When you motorvate using a cane or crutch it tends to lean into your body forming a noticeable triangle with the support, your body and the walking surface. The current figure looks like someone walking with a walking stick not some one leaning on a cane for support. It also tends to raise the shoulder on that side.
(Anonymous) on January 15th, 2019 04:32 pm (UTC)
looks great
Much improved!