matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,
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_Children of a Foreign God_ the Editing

Sic 'em

Since I wrote this as two separate documents, years apart, then combined them, I'm especially concernered with continuity errors. Things being commented on or reacted to, before they happen, and so forth.

Second concern, I have the kids vs the Priests at the end. Since that isn't the "climactic battle" I'm wondering about putting it the night before the kids go into the tunnel. Opinions on that?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/15BF0ML_FARgMtwIl54zoNZrXR4JibNno6WdBeoczwZU/edit?usp=sharing
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