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26 August 2018 @ 10:54 am
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Better with a face?
cnmckenney on August 26th, 2018 05:00 pm (UTC)
Horse's eyes
I still want red eyes on the horse. Not bright but muted, just enough that you can see them. Would fit great with the face you picked for the god. Smoke coming from the nostrils is not required.
Joe Wojo Jrwojorider on August 26th, 2018 07:24 pm (UTC)
Re: Horse's eyes
like the picture of the war god, but definitely need some eyes on THE Horse. Not sure about red, I've never gotten the impression that using power caused the eyes to glow and red just isn't right, IMHO. Jet is not a demon after all
cnmckenney on August 27th, 2018 12:16 am (UTC)
Re: Horse's eyes
I'm not so sure that some who have met him on the field would agree but...
If you look at a horses eyes from the right angle with the right light many do flash red. My daughter showed me this back when she was a Girl Scout.
(Anonymous) on August 26th, 2018 05:11 pm (UTC)
Much better.
(Anonymous) on August 26th, 2018 10:06 pm (UTC)
Something is wrong. Either the angle of the chin sitting on the neck isn't quiite natural or the colour of the skin looks too different to the rest of the picture, which makes the face look pasted on. Perhaps a gold wash on the face would help, or more of that grey colour on the horse.
matapampamuphoff on August 27th, 2018 01:18 am (UTC)
Yeah, I'm still working on it. And the story, too.
cnmckenney on August 27th, 2018 10:30 am (UTC)
Watching the witch and Oner cultures interact is always amusing since they are both in their own ways very parochial. Keep up the good work.
mbarkermbarker on August 28th, 2018 01:43 am (UTC)
I went back and looked at https://pamuphoff.livejournal.com/573061.html -- I think I like the black mystery better? Although lifting the top of the helmet up to frame the mysterious void might help? Or what if he consisted of just a strip of eyes (as if his lower face were hidden)... nah?