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05 April 2018 @ 08:00 pm
_Fractured Loyalties_  
Joe Wojo Jrwojorider on April 6th, 2018 01:40 am (UTC)
I like the cover
wonder if some texture to the lettering would add to it? In any case I will be getting it
(Anonymous) on April 6th, 2018 02:59 am (UTC)
Skin tone
Shouldn't the skin tones be darker. Ra'd's description of Nighthawk is "deeply tanned". I also don't see it as representative of the story.
(Anonymous) on April 6th, 2018 10:38 am (UTC)
I like it as a picture. But it makes me think of God and creation. Like Sistine Chapel and I don't know what that has to do with the story.
(Anonymous) on April 6th, 2018 04:13 pm (UTC)
I think to match the story, you could add a baby in a cradle behind the magic spark (maybe translucent cradle?)

And yeah, the arms seem too white. I've always pictured Ra'd as arabic, and darker for Nighthawk.

(Anonymous) on April 6th, 2018 05:49 pm (UTC)
Ra'd is either mostly or solely descended from the New Prophets, IIRC, so should not look Arabic in complexion, despite the name, unless Nicholas or Emre or the grandmother were dusky.