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26 March 2018 @ 05:13 pm

Okay, I need to get _Fractured Loyanties_ ready for publishing in late April or early May.

And then _External Relations_ in June.

Except I just took a look and realized that the manuscript is (1) out dated and (2) excedeingly sketchy in a whole bunch of places.

So I'm afraid Spence is going to have to stay locked up for awhile while I deal with XR.

Quite a lot of it's been posted already. Do you guys want it from the top as I rewrite it and fill in the holes?

cnmckenney on March 26th, 2018 10:23 pm (UTC)
Sounds good to me.
Zan Lynxzlynx on March 26th, 2018 11:17 pm (UTC)
I am happy to read it again.
(Anonymous) on March 27th, 2018 12:19 am (UTC)
yes please with sugar sprinkles on top.
(Anonymous) on March 27th, 2018 12:39 am (UTC)
If you don't know by now that we always want to read all the things you write . . . Hey, guys! We're not begging Pam enough! Her ego's too small!

Please, may we have more story? Any and all story?

(Anonymous) on March 27th, 2018 12:43 am (UTC)
Sure, recycle a bit.

So I feel almost obligated to try to throw distractions your way.

I was thinking about Rael and flying, and came up with a new angle. Pyrite has both Shielded and Traveled, and also done dimensional work (put a bubble over someone). He *should* be able to use other shield-type manifestations, including some sort of "push".

The immediate thought was that Pyrite would be able to use a push against the ground to make a higher or longer jump than otherwise. By developing this to a certain extent, he would then be well placed to go "bet *I* could do that!" when he sees Rael (or maybe Bunnie?) do either a glide or a kite.

Can you say Pegasus?

matapampamuphoff on March 27th, 2018 12:48 am (UTC)
He'd have to have a huge wingspan. Unless he could also manipulate gravity. :) I'll keep it in mind.
(Anonymous) on March 27th, 2018 01:09 am (UTC)
He is Pegasus, the winged horse!
ekuah on March 27th, 2018 08:02 am (UTC)
Some random young witch:
"Hey, isn't a pegasus usually white?"
Some other random young witch:
"Hmmm... Maybe we should mix in some 'platinum blonde' potion into his oats"
::Don't you dare::
cnmckenney on March 27th, 2018 08:49 pm (UTC)
Not always
See Fantasia - Pastoral Symphony.
ekuah on March 27th, 2018 10:59 pm (UTC)
Don't forget...
... people from Comet Fall are sometime not up to date about outside stuff. (Like mistaking a cat for a skunk)