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20 February 2018 @ 11:00 pm
_Nowhere Man_  
Ready for the last typo hunt. And comments and whatever.

Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on February 21st, 2018 08:46 pm (UTC)
SuperStar too?
matapampamuphoff on February 21st, 2018 11:42 pm (UTC)
It needs a lot of work. I'll publish them separately.
James ResoldierJames Resoldier on February 23rd, 2018 08:49 am (UTC)
Be aware, I pasted it into word and found a metric butt-tonne of double spaces. I suggest that you do a search/replace for them
matapampamuphoff on February 23rd, 2018 02:56 pm (UTC)
A mere 94. Not even close to a record for me. Thanks for the reminder.
(Anonymous) on February 26th, 2018 09:14 pm (UTC)
Looks pretty good, IMHO. One thing I did notice, based upon a comment somebody had made here in the blog when you were posting it: In chapter 6 the discussion between the cops that turns into a discussion between the cops and the lab tech has a somewhat awkward transition. It isn't quite clear the lab guy is speaking in his first line.