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: matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,
2017-12-23 22:34:00

matapam
pamuphoff
2017-12-23 22:34:00

Critiquing for Christmas

_Hostile Takeover_ Part 23

He reached diagonally ahead and to the right and there it was. Just fifteen feet away. Steel frame and concrete. All he needed was to find a door .…
_Hostile Takeover_ Part 22

"I'm certain of that, sir." Barf bit his lip. "And while one of our portals might happen to be working . . . is there anything…
_Hostile Takeover_ Part 21

He could see the shield reaching across the room from Rasputin to the far wall, protecting the Governor and Chief. He took two steps to the other…