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12 September 2017 @ 09:13 am
_Last Merge_  
If any of you are wondering what story _Gate Team_ is going to get mixed up in: https://pamuphoff.livejournal.com/2017/01/14/
 
 
 
matapampamuphoff on September 12th, 2017 02:19 pm (UTC)
And I'm pulling the Ebsa and Ra'd part out of it and I'll publish it separately as _Shadow Zone_.

So _Last Merge_ will switch back and forth between Eldon's parts and Disco/Oner parts, and they meet up at the end in the big battle. And neither the meet-up nor the big battle are written.

Edited at 2017-09-12 03:00 pm (UTC)
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on September 14th, 2017 02:08 pm (UTC)
So will Eldon still use the Dimension Bomb at the end?

Followed by him drifting off in a bubble to reappear in _Nowhere Man_?

At least the Oners know about the Dimension Bomb (from The Lodge in the Mountains), even if Q doesn't.
matapampamuphoff on September 14th, 2017 07:14 pm (UTC)
Yep, and everyone will freak out afterwards.

Did I ever post this scene?

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"It ate the whole miniature universe." Q felt a bit faint. "It sort of spit out the World it was starting to merge with. Big chunks of it are gone, serious volcanism. But the entire Helaos World is just flat gone. The other membranes are separating and drifting off. They're normal, apart from a big crimp where Earth ought to be, and depending on how long ago the merge started, space and planets and so forth. Whatever Eldon did has undone that whole nasty knot."

"So . . . what did Eldon do?" Inso squinted at her.

"I haven't the faintest idea."

"Sounds pretty damned dangerous." Cliff rubbed his arms as if chilled. "Do we need to hunt him down?"

"I'm not even sure he survived it. There were no other Gates he could have used, no time to make one."

Garit shook his head. "One of the Hors de Combat, a hero. Old Gods. Well, looks like we're done here. Easterly, shall we round them up?"
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Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on September 14th, 2017 01:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you.

I have just noticed that my copy of Directorate School (The Directorate Book 1) Purchased 9 Aug. 2016 is missing a Table of Contents (TOC).

Have you already fixed this ?

If not, a new Typo Hunt may be worth while and would be suitable for a cat-vacuuming episode.
matapampamuphoff on September 14th, 2017 06:20 pm (UTC)
Son of a . . . My file has it, but my kindle is also lacking.

Okay, I've rebuilt the TOC. And I'll update the book list at the back. Any one who feels like typo hunting, have at it:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cmFm2132xxWiqV3T0C9AbR70tkftjRftQ4PqmdzL98c/edit?usp=sharing