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10 September 2017 @ 11:47 pm
Fussing at covers . . . .  
Formerly known as _Rescue Mission_
(Anonymous) on September 11th, 2017 06:24 am (UTC)
I like it!

(Anonymous) on September 11th, 2017 06:47 am (UTC)
The destruction comes across well. What doesn't really show is a merge, either partway, or completed. But I'm not sure that makes a difference, since if someone knows what the merge is, then they probably don't care about the cover anyway...

But anyway, is this one before or after the story where Paer goes spying in the boardroom?

matapampamuphoff on September 11th, 2017 01:19 pm (UTC)
After. And immediately after _Fort Dinosaur_.
ekuah on September 11th, 2017 01:20 pm (UTC)
I second this!
Maybe you can patch in some things out of place into the streets.
Like a half molten (half merged) car.
Or some trees stuck in the concrete.
mbarkermbarker on September 12th, 2017 01:38 am (UTC)
Re: I second this!
Scales wrong for small stuff (like tree's and cars). But how about making the border between the blue sky and the stormy sky a little less regular? Right now, it almost feels like the blue is just artistic cover. If the two systems are interacting, wouldn't the edge be less simple arc, and more storm like?