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pamuphoff
03 August 2017 @ 07:42 pm
_Pure Poison_  

If you feel like editing, or just reading it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/19GAHXvABrwxGUzru4ZeJW6uYXJlmn2XR2nCvbGZyMdA/edit?usp=sharing

I'll publish it as a separate short story, and the other four are gettig mashed together.

 
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matapampamuphoff on August 4th, 2017 01:04 am (UTC)
Good grief you people are fast! I couldn't even get back to fix the malapropism I spotted while fighting with formatting before one of you had found it!
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Dean AgnewDean Agnew on August 4th, 2017 06:55 pm (UTC)
Rofl, I got to it and the stuff I noticed was all already marked too.

Although I did notice you left off the part where Urfa realizes she quits and is planning to find a normal secretary fast when Puur shows up. While I am not sure how close you plan to tie this into a lead in to the rest of the stories you are Mashing together, this does play into the early flight part so may need included to keep us readers flowing through the story.

Also the thought of Izzo drafting Bunny and baby-faced Scar as an undercover duo is actually kind of scary...
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