matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,
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Organizational question

This is the only scrambled world I'm going to follow in detail. But Disco is tracking down the other six, while trying to get Nuked One World and Nuked Earth to play nice (AKA not shoot civilians from each others worlds that got dumped i the middle of Paris or Nowhereistan) and build embassies on Embassy.

The other six worlds will involve rescuing people from the upper floors of buildings on the water world, failing to find survivors on the Dino World, starving and desperate people on the barren and algae worlds, and mixed friendship and hostilities on the two mining Worlds toward these Oners who dropped in from nowhere while destrying the main mine entrance.

Shall I toss in an occasional chapter from Disco, carrying out these rescues, or put it all (very briefly) in at the end.

The reason I'm thinkimg about putting it in is that _Mirror, Mirror_ starts with Disco and Ebsa investigating. I'll need to bring it back to that at the end. But would interludes help or break the narative? It's choppy enough as it is, with three POVs.
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