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22 March 2017 @ 01:19 pm

I've added a bit and changed a bit. Especially point out where I've missed a change and created a continuity error.

No rush. I'm off to California again, and won't publish until I'm back.
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on March 22nd, 2017 10:13 pm (UTC)
Extra points if you can insert a use of the verb "to surveil" at least once
mbarkermbarker on March 23rd, 2017 12:15 am (UTC)
You mean having someone declaim "I am the king of all I surveil"? Or maybe the survey lance corporal fell off the bed onto a stack of privates? Or maybe "To blackmail or surveil, that is the question?"
(Anonymous) on March 23rd, 2017 01:20 am (UTC)
OK, I'm going back and replacing that picture. Then you can make fun of my model. Please note that this is a work in progress, and will get much better. I think.
mbarkermbarker on March 23rd, 2017 01:31 am (UTC)
I was just teasing Michawl! You don't need to replace the picture, unless you want to. We just like the word surveil. Kind of like travail, chain mail, on the other side of the veil... It's a funny word! Backformation from surveillance? So we had the noun, and we invented a verb to go with it? English is so much fun!