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07 February 2017 @ 01:57 pm
_Trouble in Paradise_  
 I've entered all the corrections, fooled with it here and there. Clean version has been uploaded to the same URL:
For those who are relatively new, or who want to score a reasonably clean copy.
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on February 9th, 2017 12:51 am (UTC)
Thank you.

Have you any intentions for a different title ?

It does seem to me that "Paradise" for One World is an uneasy fit.

"Once is coincidence ..." perhaps
matapampamuphoff on February 10th, 2017 10:30 pm (UTC)
Bwahahaha! _One_ count it, _one_ grammatical error found! Okay, so it was the second round. But usually I have so many outstanding errors that lots of the little ones slip through.