matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,

_Trouble in Paradise_

The Google doc.

For new lurkers, the google doc is where the typo hunt takes place. Pay no attention to the formatting--is always messes up on the copy and paste. Ignore the chapter lables, those are so I can find things easily and will be removed and the numbering and dates  and whatnot all fixed up.

Feel free to jump in and point out continuity errors and plot holes, and even stuff you especially like.

  • _Hostile Takeover_ Part 23

    He reached diagonally ahead and to the right and there it was. Just fifteen feet away. Steel frame and concrete. All he needed was to find a door .…

  • _Hostile Takeover_ Part 22

    "I'm certain of that, sir." Barf bit his lip. "And while one of our portals might happen to be working . . . is there anything…

  • _Hostile Takeover_ Part 21

    He could see the shield reaching across the room from Rasputin to the far wall, protecting the Governor and Chief. He took two steps to the other…

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