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19 June 2016 @ 04:38 pm
_Directorate School_  
https://docs.google.com/document/d/12hMibKCTshSDCbZQZHEf0xzPMGau27NLLiYkA4STofA/edit?usp=sharing

No rush on either of these. Rael is scheduled for July 28 and Directorate School for Aug 16.
 
 
 
Hazel Leah Woodshlwoods on June 20th, 2016 01:56 pm (UTC)
TO clarify, since I just started following: are you looking for comments on typos, etc?

Because if so the first sentence of the blurb "Genetically engineering lifted psychic powers above the random background of coincidence." should read "Genetic engineering ..."
matapampamuphoff on June 20th, 2016 03:33 pm (UTC)
Yep. The Google doc is the place for the typo hunt. And a good place for comments about anything else as well.
matapampamuphoff on June 20th, 2016 05:07 pm (UTC)
Generally, if the typo is obvious, just throw some highlighter across it. Otherwise a side comment or <<>> and highlighter right in the text will straighten me out.

More general comments might be best placed at the end of the chapter. as in <<
[Error: Irreparable invalid markup ('<half [...] anyway?>') in entry. Owner must fix manually. Raw contents below.]

Generally, if the typo is obvious, just throw some highlighter across it. Otherwise a side comment or <<<loose not lose>>> and highlighter right in the text will straighten me out.

More general comments might be best placed at the end of the chapter. as in <<<Half the time I can't tell who's speaking and where the heck are they, anyway?>>>
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on June 20th, 2016 03:39 pm (UTC)
Chapter three of _Directorate School_ has a /// left in

///Establish Ra'd's belligerence, stubbornness, aggressiveness (NOT sexual) and general all around Warrior attitude.///

I like the extra little details you have added.
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on June 22nd, 2016 06:02 pm (UTC)
On something there may be a rush on - Embassy.

I fixed some 'different than' to 'different from' / 'different to' and went back to check Embassy too and was told it was being removed "in the owner's bin"

Would you care to run a find and replace to avoid this infelicity ?

=="And you look a bit different than when I saw you last, Inso." Xen scratched his head.==

==It was not that different than microelectronics, when you got right down to it.==
matapampamuphoff on June 22nd, 2016 06:49 pm (UTC)
Thanks, got 'em. I probably shouldn't have pulled it so soon, every time I open it, something pops out at me.