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19 May 2016 @ 01:54 pm
matapampamuphoff on May 19th, 2016 06:56 pm (UTC)
Still needs work, but it looks like an umbrella, and the sparkles might help signal "fantasy" This is with the wide latin, rather than the harrington font
Bretbretw on May 19th, 2016 10:39 pm (UTC)
Definitely better!
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on May 20th, 2016 02:10 pm (UTC)
Only slightly.

And still doesn't work as a thumbnail.
muirecanmuirecan on May 20th, 2016 10:33 pm (UTC)
I'm on the fence, I kind of liked it more without the sparkles but that is me. And only a tiny bit more so ...
muirecanmuirecan on May 20th, 2016 10:43 pm (UTC)
I think I don't like the stars on the face and the issue with the earlier one is that the face blends into the background. Interestingly the stars version here seems to somehow fix that problem. Probably by drawing the eye to something else.

Maybe pull 2 or 3 of the stars off the face and I would like it better? It's a bit busy for my taste. So I think I'm having a problem with the stars on the face and how busy with stars it is.... ::ponder:: Anyway that's my feedback for what it's worth.