matapam (pamuphoff) wrote,
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_Goat Wizards_

Is now a google.doc. Tell me what you think. What I took too much out of, what is still too icky (Yes, I know you'll all disagree, but I need a bunch of opinions) Oh, and typo hunt if you feel like it. I have to go ponder covers.
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