So if you spotted any plot holes, inconsistencies or anything that made you want to punch your computer, this is the place to tell me all about it. Please. And you more experienced readers as well. Anything you've always meant to mention? Tell me now.
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So if you spotted any plot holes, inconsistencies or anything that made you want to punch your computer, this is the place to tell me all about it. Please. And you more experienced readers as well. Anything you've always meant to mention? Tell me now.
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_Hostile Takeover_ Part 19
He glanced at the time. The days are getting longer, but it's still dark until . . . I'll need to park to the west of Number Four Portal…
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_Hostile Takeover_ Part 18
Easiest escape ever. Desk Man programmed the outside cams to record and loop. The Ladies followed directions. So they walked out through the museum,…
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_Hostile Takeover_ Part 17
and get the last one out before the first one's rest period is over and they raise the alarm. Dammit. It's not going to be possible.…
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_Hostile Takeover_ Part 19
He glanced at the time. The days are getting longer, but it's still dark until . . . I'll need to park to the west of Number Four Portal…
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_Hostile Takeover_ Part 18
Easiest escape ever. Desk Man programmed the outside cams to record and loop. The Ladies followed directions. So they walked out through the museum,…
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_Hostile Takeover_ Part 17
and get the last one out before the first one's rest period is over and they raise the alarm. Dammit. It's not going to be possible.…