Any more opinions as to name changes, or anything else? I'm about to finalize it.
Captain Black and Lieutenant Brazil were place keeper names while I was writing, and I've got a bunch of unnamed Purple kids.
Mandolin and Harp got a comment, anyone else have any problems with their names?
I doubt that anyone but Kaat and Danny Black will ever get mentioned again (oh, that's not safe to say!) but you never know when you'll need a character to just walk through.