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09 December 2016 @ 12:24 pm
_Trouble in Paradise_  
The Google doc.

For new lurkers, the google doc is where the typo hunt takes place. Pay no attention to the formatting--is always messes up on the copy and paste. Ignore the chapter lables, those are so I can find things easily and will be removed and the numbering and dates  and whatnot all fixed up.

Feel free to jump in and point out continuity errors and plot holes, and even stuff you especially like.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ht6LMcdxD_rW0F8GjjZfMPW0_TFIPx94Xhw4IHcuNLs/edit?usp=sharing
 
 
 
(Anonymous) on December 10th, 2016 11:48 pm (UTC)
I would suggest a little more (as in infodump) about the ex-governor of New York. We gathered that governors are elected positions so how was he removed ?
matapampamuphoff on December 11th, 2016 04:06 am (UTC)
Right, in case someone reads this one first.
mbarkermbarker on December 21st, 2016 05:33 am (UTC)
I think you might find this amusing. I've got a long technical paper I'm proofreading -- which is painful. So what do I do when I take a break? Turn around and proofread Trouble in Paradise. Oh, well, it amused me when I realized that I was using your proofreading as a break from my other proofreading... some people just can't stop, I guess. Thanks!
matapampamuphoff on December 21st, 2016 01:35 pm (UTC)
Okay. I'm officially boggled. :D