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17 April 2016 @ 01:08 pm
Next up!  
Now I really need to work on kicking Embassy into shape. Would you guys like the whole thing from the top, or shall I dredge up something new?
 
 
 
(Anonymous) on April 17th, 2016 11:41 pm (UTC)
either would work, but maybe start off with a summary? I'm thinking of just a quick list of the major points that need to be touched to make it sync, not a full outline. On in other words, why this story has to be next instead of just a side story.

I think that was one of my initial problems with Cascades, I didn't get a feel for how the snippets hung together until later discussions.
matapampamuphoff on April 18th, 2016 12:32 am (UTC)
Yeah, one problem with snippetting is that the readers don't get the whole feel of the story.

You know what. I think I'll take a couple of days to read through it and find the holes even I can't miss, then put the whole thing up as a google doc.

We can compare that with the effects of getting it over a month in snippets.
matapampamuphoff on April 18th, 2016 04:01 pm (UTC)
Actually it'll take a lot longer than "a couple of days" to kick this into shape. Lemme see what old stuff I have to entertain you with.
matapampamuphoff on April 18th, 2016 12:36 am (UTC)
Oh, and the purpose of Dark side and Cascades was to set up the Hors and Rior as the main villains in _Embassy_ and occasional nuisances thereafter. And get Eldon out of prison and eventually getting himself straight.