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27 January 2016 @ 02:37 pm
_Witch Wars_  
 A little over 20K words.

I've gone through and updated the Google doc. Any serious misgivings about it as a novella? Plot holes? Stuff left out or needing explanation?
 
 
 
matapampamuphoff on January 27th, 2016 10:12 pm (UTC)
In fact, I clearly didn't have the most up to date draft with me. But apart from the last witch fight, not much changed.
(Anonymous) on January 28th, 2016 02:26 am (UTC)
The only thing I can think of is really a background detail. Those who have read the whole series have a feel for what happened when on the spy mission to the Oners, but new people might not.

Could you add a few thoughts as to why Heliotrope is considered a tech person? Putting something in might also do a better job of establishing time-frame, in relation to what is or has happened outside the scope of this story.

Darqref