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26 June 2015 @ 04:41 pm
_Mages At Large_ Google Doc  
If you want to see the almost final product, and, of course, typo hunt.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I4WNO1KddRQQA-TeFFv_NZt-IW1WF8IpZ9xTJq7Pu4Y/edit?usp=sharing
 
 
 
Michawl DolbearMichawl Dolbear on June 27th, 2015 05:36 pm (UTC)
As far as the scenes in Harry's Inn are concerned, where's Flare ?

She arrives in Warriors and is still there at the end of Archetypes.



Little Egret in Walton-on-Thames
matapampamuphoff on June 27th, 2015 07:26 pm (UTC)
In the kitchen, cooking. No doubt she looked out, but Falco didn't notice.
hollybambolo on June 27th, 2015 07:18 pm (UTC)
Fories or Forres?

Havi's horse Splash changes sex.
matapampamuphoff on June 27th, 2015 07:33 pm (UTC)
The city of Forest is inhabited by Fories. How do you guys even see these things?

Poor Splash is a very confused horse, by now. But he is no longer a her in that scene.

Edited at 2015-06-27 07:40 pm (UTC)
hollybambolo on June 27th, 2015 08:17 pm (UTC)
Fresh eyes, and we don't know what you meant to write. What I still can't believe is that I see double spaces.

I'm sure Splash can talk someone into that spell whenever he wants, but we've been given to understand it takes three months. *grin*
Bretbretw on July 3rd, 2015 04:51 am (UTC)
Wow! I enjoyed it much more - you added and massaged a tremendous amount since when you first posted it!

I'm glad you have so many volunteer typo checkers now. Things you release should be pretty clean going forwards.

Speaking of that, what are your publishing plans for the next few months?
matapampamuphoff on July 3rd, 2015 02:22 pm (UTC)
I'm about to head off on vacation, and I'm waffling over putting up anything before I get back.

However, I'm going to reload Outcasts, and try some advertising. Then post Mages, Art Theft, Triplets, Sea Wolves, and Bad Karma in fairly quick sequence.

I want to get out Time Loop and Atlantis this year.

Bretbretw on July 3rd, 2015 04:27 pm (UTC)
By the way, didn't "Mages at Large" used to "Archmage"?

I know I don't get to vote but I think "Archmage" is a stronger title.
matapampamuphoff on July 3rd, 2015 05:04 pm (UTC)
It's one of the seven (as as now) stories of various lengths that used to be shoved into the original "Corridors" and "Archetypes" It kept the "Corridors" name for a long time. But naming it after the Bad Guy is not a bad idea.

Edited to add: Archmage is the title of a story in _A Taste of Wine_. Not sure I should reuse it.

Edited at 2015-07-03 05:33 pm (UTC)